Read the following sentences from the story: Far too crowded, how can anyone see anything?

5. Read the following sentences from the story: Far too crowded, how can anyone see anything? Too much splashing, you'll frighten the fish! (paragraph 10) What literary device does the author use in these sentences, and how does it develop character?
6. PART A: In 'Ginny's Story' (paragraphs 8--12), how does the author show what Ginny is like?